is my exam worth, or what i'm looking for?
my exam is out of 15 i think. (probably Intro + 2 paragraphs + conclusion)
i'm looking for an above 10 response (I'm unsure how to compare in one paragraph only)
intro 3-4 lines. composed of 1 conceptual topic sentence that explores the related theme of both texts. then follow with - Whilst text 1 does theme through___text 2 does theme through____
bp-1 - topic sentence. 2-3 sentences of WHILST text 1 does theme X thru ___. Then linking sentence for eg- HOWEVER text 2 does thematic exploration through___ then 2 anayltical snetence.
Conluding/reader reflection senetnce compounded into 1
repeat for another bp
conclusion. no one cares about conclusions so just cap off with a reiterated topic snetence and. eg- Thus to a great extent text 1 does ____________text 2 does________________