business report

Just wondering if anyone could mark my business report, as my teacher rarely gives feedback, I would only get comments on my handwriting. TSYM for reading and marking my work! Please mark me AS HARSH as you could! Feel free to comment in this Google Doc I've posted in my other post, please...

I dont have much experience in writing business reports, so I'm not too sure how good this report is, Any feedback is greatly appreciated! (If there are any spelling errors, please ignore, this was speed typed)

Hey there. In preparation for our business studies exam replacement task, my teacher went through a PowerPoint explaining how to write a business report, but I'm not sure I completely understand -- do we simply just write body paragraphs on each of the points required? He didn't give us any...